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Can I write an explanation about the success of the Roman army?

 For this lesson, you need the notes you made last week and the introduction and first 2 paragraphs you wrote.

Today you are going to be writing the next 2 or 3 paragraphs to finish your explanation text. You need to add paragraphs about the soldiers skills, their training and another if you can about life in the Roman army. 

Remember to look at the success criteria below to help you.

Tomorrow, you will edit this writing before sending me your work.



I have information organised into paragraphs all about the same subject. Each has an appropriate sub-heading


I include some description to give detail when appropriate to interest the reader and/or help them understand more clearly.


I use a range of technical vocabulary


In my sentences I use a range of conjunctions including because, so, this causes, therefore